IA Basic Editing Samples

Given below are some examples of grammatical corrections and improvements we have made for the IA Basic Editing service. Click on the images below to enlarge and view them.

Example 1:

In this example, the student’s sentence construction was improved by changing the voice, modifying transition elements. We adjusted the tenses accordingly to strengthen overall coherence, making his point clear and concise. The student was also informed about making changes to his citations to ensure consistency.


Example 2:

Here, besides making grammatical corrections, we shortened the student’s previously wordy content by using more concise language. In doing so, we have effectively reduced the word count, without losing any of the student’s intended context and material.



 
 
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